Draft talk:Jewish Labour Bund, Inc (Australia)

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First rejection

The first draft of this was rejected due to the organisation "not being of note enough for warrant a page". I am merely confused because I created this page because there are several dead links, including on the Bundist info boxes, to this, the Bund's Branch in Australia. How could it not be noteworthy enough for a page, when there was an empty page and a couple of dozen dead links to the page waiting to be created? I am very confused. Alastair Alan Percy Warner (talk) 22:10, 26 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

List of sources to interrogate

https://www.jstor.org/stable/10.2979/jss.2009.16.1.111?mag=how-the-jewish-labor-bund-changed-after-world-war-ii https://www.cambridge.org/core/books/jews-in-australia/3DB8ACF85F95808F7F1559C09D654A22 https://plus61j.net.au/culture-thought/zol-lebn-der-skif-long-live-skif/ http://www.multiculturalaustralia.edu.au/library/media/Video/id/1549.Arnold-Zable-describes-the-Bund-and-SKIF-and-post-Holocaust-development-of-the-Jewish-community- https://www.monash.edu/arts/acjc/yiddish-melbourne/organisations/bund https://doi.org/10.2307/jj.2990335 https://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt5hhxfx https://www.jstor.org/stable/26394517 https://doi.org/10.2979/jss.2009.16.1.111

@Alastair Alan Percy Warner:, out of these can you point to the three best that provide in-depth coverage about Jewish Labour Bund in Austalia (see WP:ORGCRIT)? I am assuming these are cited in the draft. If so, you can just provide the footnote numbers and be sure you have included the relevant page number(s) in the citation. Also please sign your posts which can be done by typing four tildes (~~~~) or clicking the signature icon

in the edit toolbar. S0091 (talk) 16:01, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @S0091, these are sources that I have found in my research that I haven't had the chance to comb through for info to add to the article. I can provide three examples that meet the four criteria that is stipulated, I will find the best that have already been cited in the coming days. Alastair Alan Percy Warner (talk) 22:31, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Alastair Alan Percy Warner sounds good. I left a comment on the draft so the next reviewer will know to look here. S0091 (talk) 14:26, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the three primary sources I would use based on the criteria:

[8] "Australian Shtetl: Inside Melbourne's Yiddish Culture Renaissance". Haaretz. Archived from the original on 2022-07-17. Retrieved 2023-06-25. (highlights the contemporary influence and activities of the Bund)

[3] Mendes, Philip (2009-02-19). "From Warsaw to Melbourne: Conflict between the Jewish Labour Bund and The Communists". Melbourne Jewish Museum (goes in depth into the early history of the Bund)

[10] Slucki, David (2009). "The Bund Abroad in the Postwar Jewish World". Jewish Social Studies. 16 (1): 111 (puts the Bund in historical and international context

Likewise, the following also meet the criteria:

[5] "Bund". Australian Centre for Jewish Civilisation. Retrieved 2023-06-29.

[6] Ajzenbud, Moshe (1996). Cohen, Brendan (ed.). 60 Years of Bund in Melbourne 1928-1988. Translated by Mrocki, Chana and Moyshe.

[9] A Party of Naysayers: The Jewish Labor Bund after the Holocaust". AJS Perspectives. 2014-02-17. Retrieved 2023-06-25.

Alastair Alan Percy Warner (talk) 14:43, 5 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Delete Draft please

I understand the confusion around the page. It was meant to be created out of the hyperlink that already existed, thus validating its reason for existence. However due to me adding the "(Australia)" element to the title this did not occur, and as such it was stuck in draft limbo. Now being more acquainted with the procedures of wikipedia, i have remedied this error. This experience did help in drafting a full page for this organisation however. Thank you for your help. Alastair Alan Percy Warner (talk) 12:14, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Alastair Alan Percy Warner given the draft does have substantial history, I redirected it to Jewish Labour Bund (Australia). This is also what occurs when a draft is accepted. S0091 (talk) 14:11, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]