Draft:Mercedes-Benz Biome

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Declined by Czarking0 12 days ago. Last edited by Nthep 12 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: This draft as it stands in its reverted version with copyrighted content removed is not qualified for wikipedia because it is not in a neutral POV. Corporations are described as "popular". Also none of the sources are reliable and independent. Czarking0 (talk) 17:27, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

General

The Mercedes-Benz Biome is a concept car, created by the popular automobile manufacturer Mercedes-Benz as an entry in the 2010 LA Auto show, to come up with a unique vehicle which weighed less than 450 kg and could hold up to 4 passengers. It was designed to be a natural technology hybrid, and part of the earths ecosystem. It would grow a material called biofibre, and would be lighter than metal or plastic, whilst also being significantly stronger than the other, more popular materials, used by standard automobile manufacturers.

Found In:

Found in: Asphalt 8 - Airborne

Asphalt 8 - Airborne, is a 2013 video game, by popular game developer, Gameloft Barcelona, Which also created the other games in the asphalt series.

The Biome was released in the Dubai update of the game.

The Mercedes-Benz biome, is a car that features in the video game, being ranked in the B-Class of vehicles in the game. This puts the biome, right in the middle of the pack in terms of ranking. but it is slightly weaker in stats, being on the lower side of the B-Class range.

The car is renowned for its tendency to skid, and it's above average set of other stats, which have changed quite a lot over the years.

Found in: Asphalt Nitro

Asphalt Nitro, is a 2015 video game, Also from Gameloft Barcelona.

The Biome is found in the game, again in the B-class, among with 8 other cars, including Ferrari's, and Chevrolet's. This time, the car was again with the lower starting rank, but has an average max stat, along with the best tuning kit boost in the whole B,C and A-Classes, and the 6th best tuning kit boost in the whole game.

References

Fandom:

Fandom: Vehicle list (Asphalt Nitro): Vehicle list (Asphalt Nitro) | Asphalt Wiki | Fandom

Fandom: Vehicle list (Asphalt 8): Vehicle list (Asphalt 8) | Asphalt Wiki | Fandom

Fandom: Mercedes-Benz Biome: Mercedes-Benz Biome

Wikipedia:

Wikipedia: Asphalt (Series): Asphalt (Series)

Other:

Mercedes Benz Biome: Mercedes-Benz Biome