User talk:Mdunfor

My Contributions to the Wikipedia Article Project: I have been working along side class member "Hhur" on the Article "Stress in the Aviation Industry". Since my original topic is quite specialized, I started with contributing the section of Military Pilot Stress to his main article. I also strayed a bit from my topic onto the general theme of pilot stress, contribution the the main article the following: Two sections on crash incidents relating to pilot stress. An addition to the Opening topic paragraph, changing the scope and adding more information relating to our course. Addition of relevant pictures as well as citations. Additions to Causes of stress and Stress in Flight paragraphs. Editing overall structure and layout. Helping with grammar and corrections. Adding many links and connecting the page to other articles (and editing other articles to lead to ours).

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Hello, Mdunfor, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:27, 1 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stress related to military pilots (November 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Stress related to military pilots and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Fiddle Faddle 12:37, 2 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Mdunfor, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Fiddle Faddle 12:37, 2 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

MfD nomination of Draft:Stress related to military pilots

Draft:Stress related to military pilots, a page which you created or substantially contributed to, has been nominated for deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:Stress related to military pilots and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You are free to edit the content of Draft:Stress related to military pilots during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you. Fiddle Faddle 13:40, 3 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your Edits in Stress in the aviation industry article

I noticed that you added a topic on military pilot stress in my article. Someone is asking you to make some changes;"You mention chronic stress in a war zone. While that can be true it is also acute in battle. Please consider changes with citations to make it crystal clear." Hhur2 (talk) 18:46, 4 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]