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Your submission at Articles for creation: MycoMeditations Psilocybin-Assisted Retreat (May 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Qcne (talk) 19:38, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Ljuubs! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Qcne (talk) 19:38, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:MycoMeditations Psilocybin-Assisted Retreat

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A tag has been placed on Draft:MycoMeditations Psilocybin-Assisted Retreat, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Hi @Ljuubs, I am just replying to your contested deletion note here.

We judge new articles on their own merits, not compared to any other existing articles as unfortunately Wikipedia has many tens of thousands of poor quality articles that no one has improved or deleted yet.

My speedy deletion tag may have been premature so I have removed it - but I would still have declined your draft due to improper sourcing. Notice that your draft has no References section and instead loads of external links. We don't allow external links in the body of the text. You should instead follow the reference tutorial at WP:INTREFVE to include in-line citations.

If you can reformat all your references and let me know, I will take another look.

Let me know if you have any questions. Qcne (talk) 20:04, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Ok I have made the changes to make the sourcing accurate in reference to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners. Thanks Ljuubs (talk) 22:44, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: MycoMeditations Psilocybin-Assisted Retreat (May 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Justiyaya was:

per previous decline, tone issues needs to be fixed, WP:MEDRS is also a significant concern.

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Justi yaya 03:08, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Managing a conflict of interest

Hello, Ljuubs. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Draft:MycoMeditations Psilocybin-Assisted Retreat, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for article subjects for more information. We ask that you:

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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Justi yaya 22:32, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: MycoMeditations Psilocybin-Assisted Retreat (August 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ktkvtsh was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Ktkvtsh (talk) 00:33, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: MycoMeditations (August 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Miminity was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Warm Regards, Miminity (talk) (contribs) 08:02, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I don't really understand what else I can do to make this more neutral. There's nothing referenced that isn't either directly quoted or referenced to outside sources I am linking to?

This is a company doing exactly what these people do and I don't think there is any real difference between how they are currently written:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_Retreats Ljuubs (talk) 13:12, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:MycoMeditations has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:MycoMeditations. Thanks! asilvering (talk) 19:15, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: MycoMeditations (October 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kline was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:MycoMeditations and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Kline • talk • contribs 02:38, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have been editing this based on all the feedback coming through and resolving the problems, yet I am getting no specific answers for what exactly reads like an advertisement? There are many company profiles that read similar Ljuubs (talk) 20:07, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]