User talk:Kkdkkd

November 2023

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Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 09:06, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your updates to Toll Group are not minor. Please go slower, so it's easier for other editors to verify the changes, and make sure to cite reliable sources—independent sources, wherever possible—for all the changes. —C.Fred (talk) 13:06, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Fred, thanks for following up. i am new to editing on Wikipedia, so apologies for not knowing the appropriate way to make changes to page.

The changes made to the Toll Group are minor in my opinion re: the content that has been updated.

Content has been tidied up to read better and more accurate. re: team members, revenue and current organisational structure. The actual content has not changed in terms of history and facts, it has been shortened and only some information has been removed as it was not a significant footnote in Toll's history and or was a disproportionate representation of importance to Toll Group. Added to that, some facts were added as these were more significant to the history of Toll Group.

The removal of former division/business paragraph were necessary as this was outdated information and taking too much room on the page. Global Express, IPEC etc. were sold a few years ago and should not have the representation as they do on the page - how it is represented on the page is disproportionate to the Toll Group business as it is today. you may have noticed that the former divisions and businesses were still mentioned in the new version and referenced as well.

The race car sponsorship was also disproportionate and a minor footnote on the business. Toll Group has not sponsored this type of activity for over a decade.

In terms of size of page, i can understand it was a big change to page in terms of delete and replace. But if you compare versions of copy you will notice, it is not very different the narrative of Toll Group.

Please advise how i am able to get my changes implemented? Kkdkkd (talk) 00:19, 1 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
FYI i have reverted back to 31 October version as this was a minor edit to company bio. The version you and or the bot reverted back to was displaying inaccurate information about the organisation. Kkdkkd (talk) 01:05, 1 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Toll Group

Hello, I've seen your recent changes to Toll Group. I've reverted one because it had quite a bit of advertising jargon, "global solutions" is a good example of this, which is best to be avoided. All companies offer "solutions" in some shape or form.

You often make many changes in one edit. It's advisable to make one or two changes, then save the edit, then start editing again. That way, if an editor disagrees with a change, they don't have to revert all your other hard work which may have no problems with.

Thanks —Panamitsu (talk) 05:57, 19 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]