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A fact from Trumpet (ice cream) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 5 April 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the phrase "togs, togs, undies" was popularized in New Zealand by an advertisement for Trumpet ice cream cones?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2024/April. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Trumpet (ice cream).

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 16:42, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Trumpet ice creams have chocolate tips in the cone due to a measure preventing the cones from getting soggy? Source: https://thespinoff.co.nz/kai/16-02-2024/a-treat-within-a-treat-how-the-trumpet-got-its-chocolate-tip
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/DeeDo
- Comment: Emphasis must be put on that the tips are not there to prevent sogginess, but are a by-product of preventing sogginess, which can make wording difficult.

Created by Panamitsu (talk). Self-nominated at 09:54, 23 February 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Trumpet (ice cream); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

Alt1 ... that chocolate tips in the cone of Trumpet ice creams are a byproduct of a measure that prevents the cones from getting soggy? Suggestion from Schwede 66 16:00, 24 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Not a review, but is it really unique to this brand of ice cream? I could have sworn at least some Cornettos also have chocolate tips, at least from what I remember. The hook itself is interesting to me, but I'm not sure if it's unique to Trumpet. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:05, 28 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You're right, chocolate tips are not unique to Trumpets. —Panamitsu (talk) 09:47, 28 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

In any case, this is a weird case. I think the hook is interesting, but the fact that it's not unique to this brand gives me pause. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:21, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Given the issues with that angle, here are some possible alternatives; they can be reworded if needed.

ALT2 ... that the phrase "togs, togs, undies" was popularized in New Zealand by an advertisement for Trumpet ice cream cones?

ALT3 ... that a 2006 advertisement for Trumpet ice cream cones featured swimming clothing turning into underwear?

ALT4 ... that a 2006 commercial for Trumpet ice cream cones was described as New Zealand's most iconic summer advertisement?

Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:24, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Also, taking a look at the article, I would suggest the article be given a copyedit. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:29, 29 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Narutolovehinata5, I've did a bit of copyediting. With the understanding that you aren't reviewing, is it possible that you have a look over the article? My writing needs improvement. No obligation of course. —Panamitsu (talk) 10:57, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:21, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:01, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

Article is new enough and long enough. It is well sourced and neutral. No plagiarism detected by Earwig. Hooks 2-4 are interesting. I think Hook 2 is strongest (& I have struck hooks 0-1). ALT2, ALT3 andALT4 are cited here. QPQ is done. Lajmmoore (talk) 09:06, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]