Talk:Tenaya
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[edit]1) The existing text in the first paragraph: Chief Tenaya (?-1853) was a Native American chief in the Yosemite Valley people in California. Tenaya's father was the chief of the Ahwahneechee [1], which means "people of the Ahwahnee" (Yosemite Valley). The Ahwahneechees were a totally different tribe then any other surrounding tribes.
There is a typing (spelling) error, it should read:
Chief Tenaya (?-1853) was a Native American chief in the Yosemite Valley people in California. Tenaya's father was the chief of the Ahwahneechee [1], which means "people of the Ahwahnee" (Yosemite Valley). The Ahwahneechees were a totally different tribe THAN any other surrounding tribes.
i.e. the THEN should be a THAN
2) The existing text in the second paragraph: The Ahwahneechee occupied Yosemite Valley until a sickness destroyed most of them. The few Ahwahneechee left Yosemite Valley and joined the Mono Lake Paiutes in the eastern Sierra Nevada. Tenaya's father married a Mono Paiute woman and Tenaya was born from that union. Tenaya grow up amongst his mothers people and married a Mono Paiute woman and had several children.
There is a typing (spelling) error, it should read:
The Ahwahneechee occupied Yosemite Valley until a sickness destroyed most of them. The few Ahwahneechee left Yosemite Valley and joined the Mono Lake Paiutes in the eastern Sierra Nevada. Tenaya's father married a Mono Paiute woman and Tenaya was born from that union. Tenaya GREW up amongst his mothers people and married a Mono Paiute woman and had several children.
i.e the GROW should be GREW
Many thanks, Andrew Douglas
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