Talk:Silicon Tare/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:27, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add a short description and then alt text to the infobox's image.
- Done for short description. For alt text, I unfortunately don't know exactly how to do it because the image is not too simple to describe, and it's even harder as a non-native English speaker, I believe. In the past I've also promoted articles to GA without using alt text, so I don't know if it's really necessary. GhostP. talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
- Improve the image's non-free use rationale with this template.
- According to Ghostly International, the label on which the album was released, this is where the story "takes a dark turn", with the astronaut making contact with the "Wave 1 colony". – reword. Maybe → According to Ghostly International, the label on which the album was released is where the story "takes a dark turn" and features the astronaut making contact with the "Wave 1 colony".
- I made a different change, because the source states that the astronaut makes contact with the "Wave 1 colony" "[a]t the conclusion of Wave 1" (2014), not exactly in Silicon Tare, but I forgot to add this. GhostP. talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
- Silicon Tare released → Silicon Tare was released
- Is #Release_history necessary if it only features one release?
- I agree it is not needed, removed. GhostP. talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
- Same thing with #Charts, can the detail be moved/merged into a different section?
- Charts usually get their own section even if the album/single charted only once, so I think it can stay. I did remove the one line sentence, though. GhostP. talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
- Archive sources (you can do it manually or use this automatic tool).
- Add the "use mdy dates" template to have date consistency.
- Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:56, 20 July 2021 (UTC)