Talk:Senpai Is an Otokonoko/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 16:57, 27 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The article looks good but there are some things that confused me about the series and need to be solved for the review:

The lead confused in regards to the serialization. Is it still ongoing? Did it end or was cancelled?
- It is ongoing but scheduled to end on December 30. I don't think there is anything in the lead that suggests it has ended yet, and in the release section it says The series is planned to end with chapter 100 on December 30, 2021.--Alexandra^IDV 21:28, 28 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Since the lead is where the main characters are mentioned first I would suggest adding the last names.
- Sure.--Alexandra^IDV 21:28, 28 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I would suggest adding a brief reception commentary to the lead per wp:lead
- It's already there: The series was popular with readers and well received by critics for its writing and characters, becoming the third-place winner of the 2021 Next Manga Award and the third most read Line Manga series of 2021.. If you want me to expand it, I can do so.--Alexandra^IDV 21:28, 28 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Volume list does not have an ending which left me the same confusion. If it is still ongoing it should noted while, if it ended, it needs an ending for the narrative.
- The tankobon (collected volume) releases have not collected the entire series yet - only volume 1 is out, which collects the first 8 chapters (out of a total of 100). I will continue summarizing the volumes as they are released.

@Alexandra IDV: Other than that I see no major issues. Fix them and I'll gladly pass it. Happy holidays. In case you are busy due to holidays I can wait.Tintor2 (talk) 13:42, 28 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]