Talk:Lover (Live from Paris)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 06:50, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Vaughan J. (talk · contribs) 11:39, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good.
"released via Republic Records on February 14, 2023." → "released on February 14, 2023, via Republic Records." Done
"A Valentine's Day-special" → "A Valentine's Day special" Done
"at the Olympia, Paris" → "at the Olympia theater, Paris" Done
"the US Billboard Vinyl Albums chart." → "the US Billboard Vinyl Albums chart." Done

Background

Retitle to "Background and release" and merge with the below section, per the short size. Done
"2019, through Republic" → "2019, via Republic" Done
"at the Olympia music hall" → "at the Olympia theater" Done

Release

Make this the last two paras of the above section, per the short size. Done
Everything else looks good!

Commercial performance

"topped the Billboard Vinyl Albums chart" → "topped the Billboard Vinyl Albums chart" Done

Track listing

Looks good!

Personnel

Pipe production to Record producer Done
Pipe songwriting to Songwriter Done
"master engineering" → "mastering" and pipe it to Mastering (audio) Done
Pipe mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music) Done
"record engineering" → "engineering" and pipe it to Audio engineer Done

Notes

Looks good!

References

Copyvio score – It looks amazing at 10.7%!
The reference list needs a few changes:

Ref 1–3, 5–10, 13 – Change the access dates to when you first added them, since this article was expanded between February 28 to March 1. Partly done – was changed to the current date

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of these issues are fixed; had to do it instant for you! Only minor changes are needed. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 11:39, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. I've implemented all your suggestions. Regarding the access dates, I've changed them to today's date as the content of all the URLs have not changed after their addition to the article. ℛonherry☘ 16:54, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Pass now; sorry for the late response, but there are no issues left! Great job! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 06:49, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.