Talk:Jenni Alpert
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[edit]Much of the lead section should go in the career. It should also be supported with citations. Details on producer and mixers should be shortened, with the prose focusing on the key people and Alpert's musical contributions. -AngusWOOF (talk) 21:09, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
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~~~ ether. As Alpert aided her birth father through different stages of rehabilitation, acclimation, and self-discovery also getting to know him musically through developing and recording a music repore
repore together, documentary maker Brodsky filmed many days of them together editing what was to become the documentary short “Homeless: The Soundtrack” which was selected and screened at Tribeca Film ~~~
Lead section
[edit]To anyone reading this, I already moved the excessive information of the lead section of this article to entirely new sections. If you think you have an issue with my edit, feel free to reply. AsianStuff03 (talk) 14:13, 5 March 2024 (UTC)