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biased presentation of substantive response

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The structure and content of this article are significantly biased in favor of Tuvel and the contentions of her article. The 'Social Media Response' section spends more than a paragraph on the personal backlash received by Kelly Oliver, not even the author herself.

The third paragraph does detail some of the substantive criticisms of the article, but only cites one person, despite one of the sources being a comprehensive review of the controversy that could be used to add additional perspectives.

The Rebuttal section presents substantive arguments in support of the article using biased language that presents them as reliable, and the Academic Response section is also heavily weighted in defense of the article, while the objections presented are only based on process, not substance.

The Social Media Response section should open with criticisms of the content of the article, and not simply the namecalling against the author, which obscures the entire basis of the controversy. The McKenzie et al article, source 5, would be a good starting point to add this needed context, and is available in full text at https://archive.ph/GjD4C

This source also links to a 12 page bibliography of race and gender scholarship, which appears to contradict the Smith quote at the end of the Rebuttal section. 2601:445:801:6F30:A862:FB96:645D:C954 (talk) 09:19, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]