Talk:Gottfried Schloemer/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:52, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Progress

• Add a serial comma after "mechanical engineer".

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• "lived on the south" → "lived in the south"

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• Add alt text and upright to every image.

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• "birthplace of first" → "birthplace of the first"

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• "farm land" should be written as one word.

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• "a few of years" → "a few years"

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• "Mid life" should be written as one word.

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• Add a comma after "In this buggy".

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• "home-made" → "homemade"

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• "naptha" → "naphtha"

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• "as a fuel" → "as fuel"

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• "in the later part" - reword

   Done

• "Schloemer with first" → "Schloemer with the first"

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• Add a hyphen between "mass produce".

   Done

• "horeless" - typo?

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• "Arizonia Republic" - typo?

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• Add a hyphen between "gasoline driven" (both times).

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• "achievement. " → "achievement."

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• Remove the comma after "made in 1896".

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• Add a comma after "Schlöemer's death".

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• "furore" - typo?

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• Sort categories in alphabetical order.

   Done

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:51, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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