Talk:Frank Mestnik/GA1

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:13, 31 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 17:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

He was a multi-sport athlete there, you can drop "there" as it is already implied
as they finished, "they" -> "the team"
What was the result of the 1960 College All-Star game?
He made the Cardinals' roster and appeared in nine games, four to five as a starter,[a] as a rookie, being their second-leading rusher and fifth-leading point scorer with 104 carries for 429 yards (a 4.1 average) and three touchdowns; he also caught three passes for 24 yards and returned three kickoffs for 39 yards as St. Louis went 6–5–1, there is a lot happening in this sentence. Recommend breaking it up into 2 or 3 sentences.
National Football League Players Association can be shortened to "NFL Players Association" since you stated the acronym in the lead
Ref spot check: 5, 7, 13, 17, 18, 22

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:47, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: Issues addressed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:24, 31 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:12, 31 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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