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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:56, 6 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review this today! --K. Peake 07:56, 6 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • ""Ámame" was written by Selena, who wrote about" → "The song was written by Selena, penned about"
  •  Done
  • Close the first para with a sentence about the song's release
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  • ""Ámame" received a positive response from music critics, where" → "The song received positive response from music critics, who" with the pipe, adding what critics generally praised about the song
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  • "The song peaked at number 27 on" → "It peaked at number 27 on"
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  • "Selena's writing of "Ámame" was" → "Selena's writing of the song was"
  •  Done
  • Add a comma after limited drama
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Background and production

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  • Retitle to Background and release, merging the first para of the following section with this one
  •  Done
  • "production of the group's works." → "production of the music."
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  • "the band hired Joe Ortega" → "the group hired Joe Ortega"
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  • "Ortega quit the band" → "Ortega quit Selena y Los Dinos"
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  • "Pérez rejoined the band in" → "Pérez rejoined the group in"
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  • "Selena requested writing assistance" → "She requested writing assistance"
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  • Is a comma really needed before Abraham Quintanilla?
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  • Add the appropriate ref at the end of any sentence using a quote
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  • Remove comma after third studio album
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Music, lyrics and reception

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  • Move the first para to being the second of the above section
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  • "It is the fourth and final single released from" → "The song was released as the fourth and final single from" adding the release month
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  • The chart positions should be with the critical stuff since commercial is a form of reception
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  • Is the 40-position part really notable?
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  • Move the songwriting credit stuff to background instead
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  • "The singer previously wrote," The singer had previously wrote"
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  • Remove comma after EMI Latin
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  • Swap the Houston Chronicle and second Billboard piece since the first is more focused on comp
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  • "in 1993, to be" → "in 1993 to be"
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  • "throaty vocals." which displayed a" → "throaty vocals", which displayed a"
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  • ""dance-pop anthem" and believed" → ""dance-pop anthem", and believed"
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  • "into the heavens."" → "into the heavens"." per MOS:QUOTE
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  • The song being in the drama is not sourced
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  • Remove comma after limited drama
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  • "upsets Pérez who suspects" → "upsets Pérez, who suspects"
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  • "towards Pérez and" → "towards him and"
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Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Chart performance

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  • Good

References

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Works cited

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  • Should any sources really be wikilinked after the first instance?
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Final comments and verdict

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  • AJona1992 You still need to properly change the critical response part in the lead, add the release month of the single, move the songwriting credit to the first para of background and reorder music, lyrics and reception so the comp comes before chart positions. --K. Peake 06:16, 7 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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