Talk:400 Madison Avenue/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Basic stuff and comments

Infobox and lead look good.
"Just prior to" → "Before" (less wordy)
Remove the comma after "of a window".
"for the purpose of" - extremely wordy so reword.
"which found" → "that found"
"During October 1928" → "In October 1928"
"a $11.5 million" → "an $11.5 million"
Sort categories in alphabetical order.
That's it here:

Images are free-to-use.
Article is stable.
It's also broad in its coverage.
Great work.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 15:45, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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