Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Air discography/archive1

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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 00:09, 26 January 2013 [1].

Air discography

Featured list candidates/Air discography/archive1

Nominator(s): Holiday56 (talk) 11:21, 30 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because having worked on the discography extensively, I believe that it may be ready to be promoted to featured list status. Holiday56 (talk) 11:21, 30 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments by NapHit (talk) 11:49, 31 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments looks good!

"Moon Safari hit the top ten" hit is not exactly encyclopaedic language, perhaps reached instead?
"spawned three singles" spawned is an odd word to use, again not really encyclopaedic would change this
"Playground Love", the album's only single, peaked at number 25 in the UK.[1] the band's second studio album" spot the mistake here!

NapHit (talk) 05:02, 31 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

- All done. Holiday56 (talk) 06:25, 31 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Support meets the criteria NapHit (talk) 11:50, 31 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 09:35, 2 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"Air performing in Strand, London in 2010" mostly it's referred to as "The Strand" but that's just a street in London, is this an image of Air playing in a high street?
- Updated caption. Holiday56 (talk) 16:07, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Suitable link in the lead for "certified" would be nice.
- Done. Holiday56 (talk) 16:07, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" "All I Need".[6][2]" prefer refs in numerical order.
- Done. Holiday56 (talk) 16:07, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Do you really mean to link Le voyage dans la lune in the lead? I guess you mean Le voyage dans la lune (album)?
- Fixed link. Holiday56 (talk) 16:07, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Don't like a one-entry sub-section 1.1.1 (there's no 1.1.2), would just merge or have it in its own section.
- Merged. Holiday56 (talk) 16:07, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Could mention IRMA (and expand it) and its certification of Walkie Talkie as Gold?
- Done. Holiday56 (talk) 16:07, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 14:11, 31 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Great work, I don't see anything that requires fixing! — Statυs (talk, contribs) 22:38, 12 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Support Looks all fine to me – I see no major issues stopping this deserving to be promoted to featured status. I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 14:51, 19 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support per above. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 20:08, 22 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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