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This is the current revision of this page, as edited by Djmaschek (talk | contribs) at 20:17, 20 November 2020 (GA Review: Pass.). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this version.

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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 04:03, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I plan to review this article. Djmaschek (talk) 04:03, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Review notes below: Djmaschek (talk) 04:54, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Well-written = almost (but see comments below)
    • Construction and career: paragraph 3: sentence 1: "...renamed Volevoy on the 22nd." Date unclear. If it's 22 July 1947, please say so. My eyes were bouncing between the end of paragraph 2 and the "1949" in the next sentence.
    • Infobox reads: "Fate: Scrapped after 1 August 1959". Text reads scrapping order came on 2 September. Shouldn't it say "Scrapped after 2 September 1959"?
  • Verifiable = yes.
  • Broad = yes.
  • Neutral = yes.
  • Stable = yes.
  • Illustrated = yes.
Result: GA class. Both of my concerns were addressed. Djmaschek (talk) 20:17, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]