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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:14, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "the opening track" perhaps "the album's opening track"?
  • Done
  • "on occasion on the" perhaps "on occasion during the" (to avoid on .. on)
  • Done
  • The genre is mentioned as "glam rock" in the infobox but nowhere else (nor referenced).
  • Just removed it, easy peasy
  • I think you could say it was released by RCA in the lead.
  • Done
  • Is there a link for common time?
  • Yes! Added
  • " 12-string acoustic guitar" could link as we've linked "bongos".
  • Done
  • "Bowie's sax solo" saxophone.
  • Done
  • "his sax solo" similar.
  • Done
  • Any chart performances from anywhere?
  • Unfortunately nope.

Really, in very good condition already, so not much to worry about here! The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:06, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man All done. Thanks for reviewing! – zmbro (talk) 12:47, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]