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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk) 00:04, 5 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article shortly. I'll give it a read through now and add any points that arise below. Miyagawa (talk) 00:04, 5 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ratings: "and with 7 days after airing, reported a total of 6.7 million viewers with 2.8 rating" - somehow doesn't sound quite right, I'm thinking that "and within 7 days after airing, it reported a total..." might be better.

And that is quite literally the only issue I have with this nomination. Placing this one on hold until rectified, which I'm sure won't take too long. Good job! Miyagawa (talk) 00:18, 5 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed!. Please let me know if the article needs anything else. Thanks! Ruby2010 talk 00:42, 5 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

All good, happy to grade this one as a GA! Miyagawa (talk) 09:45, 5 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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-I'll be reviewing this article shortly. I'll give it a read through now and add any points that arise below. [[User:Miyagawa|<font face="Verdana">Miyagawa</font>]] [[User talk:Miyagawa|<font face="Verdana">(talk)</font>]] 00:04, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
+I'll be reviewing this article shortly. I'll give it a read through now and add any points that arise below. [[User:Miyagawa|<span style="font-family:Verdana;">Miyagawa</span>]] [[User talk:Miyagawa|<span style="font-family:Verdana;">(talk)</span>]] 00:04, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
 :Ratings: "and with 7 days after airing, reported a total of 6.7 million viewers with 2.8 rating" - somehow doesn't sound quite right, I'm thinking that "and within 7 days after airing, it reported a total..." might be better.
-And that is quite literally the only issue I have with this nomination. Placing this one on hold until rectified, which I'm sure won't take too long. Good job! [[User:Miyagawa|<font face="Verdana">Miyagawa</font>]] [[User talk:Miyagawa|<font face="Verdana">(talk)</font>]] 00:18, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
+And that is quite literally the only issue I have with this nomination. Placing this one on hold until rectified, which I'm sure won't take too long. Good job! [[User:Miyagawa|<span style="font-family:Verdana;">Miyagawa</span>]] [[User talk:Miyagawa|<span style="font-family:Verdana;">(talk)</span>]] 00:18, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
-::[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Firefly_%28Fringe%29&diff=417177054&oldid=416239974 Fixed!]. Please let me know if the article needs anything else. Thanks! [[User:Ruby2010|<font color="green">Ruby2010</font>]] [[User talk:Ruby2010|<font color="maroon">talk</font>]] 00:42, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
+::[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Firefly_%28Fringe%29&diff=417177054&oldid=416239974 Fixed!]. Please let me know if the article needs anything else. Thanks! [[User:Ruby2010|<span style="color:green;">Ruby2010</span>]] [[User talk:Ruby2010|<span style="color:maroon;">talk</span>]] 00:42, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
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+All good, happy to grade this one as a GA! [[User:Miyagawa|<span style="font-family:Verdana;">Miyagawa</span>]] [[User talk:Miyagawa|<span style="font-family:Verdana;">(talk)</span>]] 09:45, 5 March 2011 (UTC)