Talk:Joey Jordison/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: Canniba loki 04:45, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance:
The lead section does not summarize the article correctly.

How is it now? CrowzRSA 22:28, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
While in the infobox has a list of genres, the article does not have a musical style section. What about a section to his playing techniques?
The Music career section pretty much covers that CrowzRSA 22:28, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It is your final response?--Canniba loki 15:08, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I guess? CrowzRSA 16:43, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

B. Focused:
There is a bit of negativity in the second paragraph of the Slipknot section.
I don't see any. Can you give an exaple? CrowzRSA 22:28, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It seems to me that Jordison's work with Slipknot resumes in forcing the band to cancel their tours due to his health problems.--Canniba loki 15:08, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
That just explains his injuries and how it effected the band; what else should there be? CrowzRSA 16:43, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Aside from "he's an amazing producer" without much explanation or relevance, everything looks okay.
That's a critics view on his production, I don't understan how it's really bias.
Vocalist Jamie Hopper is a music critic?--Canniba loki 15:08, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No, but he's a musician so isn't his point of view significant. All it does is give an opinion on Jordison's production quality. CrowzRSA 16:43, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
The lack of a section describing Jordison's musical style is an open door for vandalism.
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
On hold for a week.--Canniba loki 16:36, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Failed due to nominator's lack of cooperation in improving the article. The article remains as it was, underdeveloped.--Canniba loki 14:56, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"...sometimes known by his number #1, but better known by his stage name Joey Jordison..." Why he is sometimes known by his number #1?

Jason Arnopp explains that its because one of their logos is a barcode. I don't see why explaining it should be in the article, plus it doesn't say anything about Joey's number... (80)

"He is a co-founder and the primary drummer for the Grammy Award-winning heavy metal band Slipknot..." He is the co-founder? Why primary drummer, there are two as in Kylesa? Is "Grammy Award-winning" necessary?

The lead has been re-written.

"He is considered one of the most dedicated members of the band and is involved in most elements of the band including writing, mixing and production..." Not according the source, which said "he co-handles production responsibilities on nearly every Slipknot release [...]".

Done - I just deleted it.

"Each member of Slipknot is assigned a number; Joey was assigned "#1"." Why?

Explained in first comment.

Doing...--Canniba loki 04:45, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done--Canniba loki 16:37, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]